The Task
The diagram below shows how carbon moves through the natural world in the carbon cycle.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
1How many stages? Name them.
The diagram has 6 stages arranged as a cycle around carbon dioxide in the air. Carbon is taken out of the air by plants, passes through animals and the ground, and returns to the air.
Phase 1 – Carbon taken in by living things (Stages 1–3)
- 1Photosynthesis*Plants take in CO₂ from the air.
- 2FeedingAnimals eat plants; carbon passes to animals.
- 3Respiration**Plants and animals breathe out CO₂.
Phase 2 – Carbon in the ground and back to the air (Stages 4–6)
- 4DecompositionDead plants and animals decay in the ground.
- 5Fossil fuels formOver millions of years they become fossil fuels.
- 6Burning fuelsBurning fossil fuels releases CO₂ into the air.
3Sentence Formulas
The structure behind each Band 6.5 sentence. Change the band on the left to see another level.
| Stage | Band 4.5 formula |
|---|---|
| 1 Photosynthesis* | First + N + take in + N + N + from the + N + and use + N + to + make + N |
| 2 Feeding | Next + N + eat + the + N, so + the + N + goes into + the + N |
| 3 Respiration** | Then + N and N + breathe out + N + N, and + it + goes back into + the + N |
| 4 Decomposition | In the second part + N and N + die and rot + in the + N |
| 5 Fossil fuels form | Next + after millions of years + some of them + become + N, N and N |
| 6 Burning fuels | Finally + N + burn + these + N + in + N and N, and + N + N + goes back into + the + N. Then + the + N + starts again |
| Stage | Band 5.5 formula |
|---|---|
| 1 Photosynthesis* | To begin with + N + absorb + N + N + from the + N + and use it + to + make + N |
| 2 Feeding | Next + N + eat + the + N, and + the + N + moves into + their + N |
| 3 Respiration** | At the same time + N and N + breathe out + N + N, which + returns to + the + N |
| 4 Decomposition | In the second stage + when + N and N + die, they + decay + in the + N |
| 5 Fossil fuels form | Over millions of years + some of these + N + turn into + adj + N + such as + N, N and N |
| 6 Burning fuels | Finally + these + N + are + V3 + in + N and N, and + N + N + returns to + the + N, so + the + N + begins again |
| Stage | Band 6.5 formula |
|---|---|
| 1 Photosynthesis* | The cycle begins when + N + absorb + N + N + from the + N + through + N |
| 2 Feeding | When + S + V + these + N + the + N + is + V3 + on + to + the + N |
| 3 Respiration** | Through respiration + both + N and N + release + N + N + back into the + N |
| 4 Decomposition | Turning to the second phase + adj + N and N + decompose + in the + N |
| 5 Fossil fuels form | Over millions of years + some of these + N + are + V3 + into + adj + N + such as + N, N and N |
| 6 Burning fuels | In the final stage + these + N + are + V3 + in + N and N, which + releases + N + N + into the + N, and + the + N + repeats |
| Stage | Band 7.5 formula |
|---|---|
| 1 Photosynthesis* | Taking + the + N + as the starting point + N + N + is + V3 + by + N + through + N |
| 2 Feeding | This + N + is then + V3 + to + N + when + they + consume + the + N |
| 3 Respiration** | Some of this + N + is returned + adverb + to the + N, as + both + N and N + release + N + N + through + N |
| 4 Decomposition | Turning to the second phase, when + N and N + die, their + N + decompose + in the + N |
| 5 Fossil fuels form | Over a period of + time + some of this + N + is + V3 + into + adj + N, namely + N, N and N |
| 6 Burning fuels | Finally + the + N + of these + N + in + N and N + releases + N + N + back into the + N, thereby + V-ing + the + N |
4Linkers – Sequencing Words & Transitions
Use a different linker for each stage – never “Then … Then … Then”. These are the linkers for Band 6.5.
Beginning
- First
Next step
- Next
- Then
- After that
Ending
- Finally
Joining
- … and + V3 (are taken out and put …)
- to + V (to make)
Beginning
- To begin with
- First of all
Next step
- After that / After this
- Next
- Then
Change of place / phase
- In the second stage, …
- In the factory, …
Ending
- Finally
Joining
- …, and then …
- … called + N
Beginning
- The process begins when …
- The process begins with + N
Next step
- Following this
- Subsequently
- Next
Time clauses
- Once + adj (Once dry, …)
- After + N (After fermentation, …)
Inside a stage
- …, where + clause
- …, which + verb
- … known as + N
- …, a stage which lasts …
Change of phase
- Turning to the … stage, …
Ending
- In the final stage
Beginning
- The process commences with + the + N of + N
Time
- Once + V3 (Once extracted, …)
- Following + N (Following roasting, …)
Next step
- Subsequently
- To complete the … phase, …
Result phrases
- …, leaving only + N
- …, producing + N
- …, resulting in + N
Naming
- … referred to as + N
- … ranging from X to Y
Ending
- In the final stage
- … culminating in + N
5Translation Practice – Vietnamese → English
Translate each sentence into English. The word in ( ) is the key word you must use. Check the Tense note, write your answer, then press Show answer.
Band 4.5 – 6 sentences
Đầu tiên, cây hấp thụ (take in) khí CO₂ từ không khí và dùng ánh sáng mặt trời để tạo ra thức ăn.
Tiếp theo, động vật ăn cây, vì vậy (so) carbon đi vào cơ thể động vật.
Sau đó, cây và động vật thở ra (breathe out) CO₂, và nó quay trở lại không khí.
Ở phần thứ hai, cây và động vật chết và mục rữa (rot) trong đất.
Tiếp theo, sau hàng triệu năm, một số trong chúng trở thành (become) than, dầu và khí đốt.
Cuối cùng, con người đốt những nhiên liệu này trong nhà máy và xe hơi, và CO₂ quay trở lại không khí. Sau đó chu trình bắt đầu lại (starts again).
Band 5.5 – 6 sentences
Trước tiên, cây hấp thụ (absorb) CO₂ từ không khí và dùng nó để tạo ra thức ăn.
Tiếp theo, động vật ăn cây, và carbon di chuyển (moves) vào cơ thể chúng.
Đồng thời (At the same time), cây và động vật thở ra CO₂, khí này quay trở lại không khí.
Ở giai đoạn thứ hai, khi cây và động vật chết, chúng phân huỷ (decay) trong đất.
Qua hàng triệu năm, một số xác này biến thành nhiên liệu hoá thạch, như (such as) than, dầu và khí đốt.
Cuối cùng, những nhiên liệu này được đốt (are burned) trong nhà máy và xe hơi, và CO₂ quay lại không khí, vì vậy chu trình bắt đầu lại.
Band 6.5 – 6 sentences
Chu trình bắt đầu khi cây hấp thụ CO₂ từ không khí thông qua (through) quá trình quang hợp.
Khi động vật ăn những cây này, carbon được truyền sang (is passed on) động vật.
Thông qua hô hấp, cả cây và động vật đều thải (release) CO₂ trở lại khí quyển.
Chuyển sang giai đoạn thứ hai, xác cây và động vật phân huỷ (decompose) trong đất.
Qua hàng triệu năm, một số xác này được biến thành nhiên liệu hoá thạch (fossil fuels) như than, dầu và khí đốt.
Ở giai đoạn cuối, những nhiên liệu này được đốt trong nhà máy và xe cộ, việc này thải (releases) CO₂ vào không khí, và chu trình lặp lại.
Band 7.5 – 6 sentences
Lấy khí quyển làm điểm khởi đầu (starting point), CO₂ được cây hấp thụ thông qua quá trình quang hợp.
Carbon này sau đó được chuyển (transferred) sang động vật khi chúng ăn cây.
Một phần carbon này được trả trực tiếp (directly) vào không khí, vì cả cây và động vật đều thải CO₂ qua hô hấp.
Chuyển sang giai đoạn thứ hai, khi cây và động vật chết, xác (remains) của chúng phân huỷ trong đất.
Qua khoảng thời gian hàng triệu năm, một phần vật chất này được chuyển hoá thành nhiên liệu hoá thạch, cụ thể là (namely) than, dầu và khí đốt.
Cuối cùng, việc đốt (combustion) những nhiên liệu này trong nhà máy và xe cộ thải CO₂ trở lại khí quyển, nhờ đó khép lại chu trình.
6Linker Practice
Part A: drag (or tap) the linkers into the gaps. Part B: translate using the linker in ( ).
Part A – Band 4.5 linkers (8 sentences)
Computer: drag a linker into a gap. Phone: tap a linker, then tap a gap. Tap a filled gap to empty it.
- , plants take in carbon dioxide.
- Plants use sunlight make food.
- Animals eat the plants, the carbon goes into the animals.
- Plants and animals breathe carbon dioxide.
- the second part, plants and animals die.
- They die and rot the ground.
- People burn these fuels factories and cars.
- , the cycle starts again.
Part B – Translate with Band 4.5 linkers (5 sentences)
Use the linker in ( ) and follow the Tense note.
Đầu tiên (First), cây hấp thụ CO₂ từ không khí.
Tiếp theo (Next), động vật ăn cây.
Sau đó (Then), cây và động vật thở ra CO₂.
Cuối cùng (Finally), con người đốt nhiên liệu.
CO₂ quay lại không khí, vì vậy (so) chu trình bắt đầu lại.
Part A – Band 5.5 linkers (8 sentences)
Computer: drag a linker into a gap. Phone: tap a linker, then tap a gap. Tap a filled gap to empty it.
- , plants absorb carbon dioxide.
- Plants use it make food.
- The carbon moves the bodies of animals.
- the same time, plants and animals breathe out CO₂.
- Carbon dioxide returns to the air, the cycle continues.
- plants and animals die, they decay.
- Some remains turn into fossil fuels, as coal.
- These fuels are burned, the cycle begins again.
Part B – Translate with Band 5.5 linkers (5 sentences)
Use the linker in ( ) and follow the Tense note.
Trước tiên (To begin with), cây hấp thụ CO₂.
Đồng thời (At the same time), động vật thở ra CO₂.
Khi (When) cây chết, chúng phân huỷ.
Xác biến thành nhiên liệu hoá thạch, như (such as) than đá.
Những nhiên liệu này được đốt (are burned) trong nhà máy.
Part A – Band 6.5 linkers (8 sentences)
Computer: drag a linker into a gap. Phone: tap a linker, then tap a gap. Tap a filled gap to empty it.
- The cycle begins plants absorb carbon dioxide.
- Plants absorb carbon dioxide photosynthesis.
- The carbon is passed to the animals.
- respiration, plants and animals release CO₂.
- the second phase, dead plants decompose.
- Some remains are turned fossil fuels.
- These fuels are burned, releases carbon dioxide.
- , the cycle repeats.
Part B – Translate with Band 6.5 linkers (5 sentences)
Use the linker in ( ) and follow the Tense note.
Chu trình bắt đầu khi (when) cây hấp thụ CO₂.
Khi động vật ăn cây, carbon được truyền sang (is passed on) động vật.
Thông qua (Through) hô hấp, động vật thải CO₂.
Chuyển sang (Turning to) giai đoạn thứ hai, xác cây phân huỷ.
Nhiên liệu được đốt, việc này (which) thải CO₂.
Part A – Band 7.5 linkers (8 sentences)
Computer: drag a linker into a gap. Phone: tap a linker, then tap a gap. Tap a filled gap to empty it.
- Taking the atmosphere as the starting , CO₂ is absorbed.
- This carbon is then to animals.
- They the plants.
- Some carbon is returned to the air, plants release CO₂.
- When plants die, their decompose in the soil.
- Some material is into fossil fuels.
- Fossil fuels, coal, oil and gas, are formed.
- The of these fuels releases CO₂.
Part B – Translate with Band 7.5 linkers (5 sentences)
Use the linker in ( ) and follow the Tense note.
Lấy khí quyển làm điểm khởi đầu (Taking … as the starting point), CO₂ được cây hấp thụ.
Carbon được chuyển sang động vật khi (when) chúng ăn cây.
Một phần carbon trở lại không khí, vì (as) cây thải CO₂.
Vật chất được chuyển hoá thành nhiên liệu hoá thạch, cụ thể là (namely) than.
Việc đốt nhiên liệu thải CO₂, nhờ đó (thereby) khép lại chu trình.
7Introduction – Paraphrasing the Task
Paraphrase the task sentence. The column of your band is highlighted.
| Task words | Band 4.5 | Band 5.5 | Band 6.5 | Band 7.5 |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| The diagram below shows | The diagram shows | The diagram illustrates | The diagram illustrates | The given diagram depicts |
| how carbon moves | how carbon moves | the way carbon moves | the movement of carbon | the continuous circulation of carbon |
| through the natural world | in nature | in nature | through the environment | between the atmosphere, living organisms and the ground |
| in the carbon cycle | in a process known as the carbon cycle |
The diagram shows how carbon moves in nature.
Band 4.5: changes “through the natural world” into “in nature” – simple and correct.
The diagram illustrates the way carbon moves in nature.
Band 5.5: a common reporting verb (illustrates) and a noun phrase (the way carbon moves).
The diagram illustrates the movement of carbon through the environment in a process known as the carbon cycle.
Band 6.5: nominalisation (the movement of) and a reduced relative clause (a process known as …).
The given diagram depicts the continuous circulation of carbon between the atmosphere, living organisms and the ground.
Band 7.5: precise verb (depicts), an academic noun phrase (the continuous circulation of) and an accurate list of where carbon goes.
The diagram shows / illustrates / depicts how carbon moves / the movement of carbon in nature / through the environment.
8Overview
An overview gives the number of stages and the start and end; higher bands add the two main phases in more precise language. No details (no “photosynthesis”, “coal, oil and gas” or “millions of years”).
Band 4.5 formula
Overall, there are six steps in this cycle. Plants take carbon from the air, and then it goes through animals and the ground. In the end, the carbon goes back into the air, so the cycle never stops.
Why Band 4.5: Two short simple sentences, basic words (steps, starts, finishes), no phases.
Band 5.5 formula
Overall, the carbon cycle has six stages and it is a continuous process. Carbon is taken from the air by plants, then it moves into animals and the ground, and it returns to the air in two different ways.
Why Band 5.5: Names the two parts in simple words; begins with … ends with …; no numbers or details.
Band 6.5 formula
Overall, the carbon cycle is a continuous process made up of six stages. Carbon is removed from the atmosphere by plants, passes through animals and into the ground, and is eventually returned to the air, both through respiration and through the burning of fossil fuels.
Why Band 6.5: A which-clause divides the stages into two phases; nominal phrases (the harvesting of, the production of).
Band 7.5 formula
Overall, the carbon cycle is a continuous process comprising six stages, in which carbon is removed from the atmosphere by plants, transferred through living organisms and into the ground, and ultimately returned to the air by two distinct routes: respiration and the combustion of fossil fuels.
Why Band 7.5: comprises · distinct · fall into · dashes for the phases · commencing with … culminating in … in ONE sentence.
9Writing Practice
Essay plan: Introduction → Overview → Body 1: Stages 1–3 (Carbon taken in by living things) → Body 2: Stages 4–6 (Carbon in the ground and back to the air). Your writing is saved on this device.
Exercise 1 – Match the paraphrase
Choose the best synonym for each word from the task.
- shows →
- moves →
- take in →
- breathe out →
- burning →
Exercise 2 – Choose the best Overview
Which sentence is a good overview?
Exercise 3 – Complete Body 1 (Band 4.5)
Type ONE word in each gap. Look at the diagram for the details.
First, plants in carbon dioxide from the air and use sunlight to make . Next, animals the plants, so the carbon goes into the animals. Then, plants and animals out carbon dioxide, and it goes back into the air.
Exercise 4 – Put Body 2 in order (Band 4.5)
Choose 1–5 for each sentence.
Exercise 3 – Complete Body 1 (Band 5.5)
Type ONE word in each gap. Look at the diagram for the details.
To begin with, plants carbon dioxide from the air and use it to make food. Next, animals eat the plants, and the carbon into their bodies. At the same time, plants and animals breathe out carbon dioxide, returns to the air.
Exercise 4 – Put Body 2 in order (Band 5.5)
Choose 1–3 for each sentence.
Exercise 3 – Complete Body 1 (Band 6.5)
Type ONE word in each gap. Look at the diagram for the details.
The cycle begins when plants carbon dioxide from the air through . When animals eat these plants, the carbon is on to the animals. Through , both plants and animals release carbon dioxide back into the atmosphere.
Exercise 4 – Put Body 2 in order (Band 6.5)
Choose 1–3 for each sentence.
Exercise 3 – Complete Body 1 (Band 7.5)
Type ONE word in each gap. Look at the diagram for the details.
Taking the atmosphere as the starting point, carbon dioxide is by plants through photosynthesis. This carbon is then to animals when they the plants. Some of this carbon is returned directly to the air, as both plants and animals release carbon dioxide through .
Exercise 4 – Put Body 2 in order (Band 7.5)
Choose 1–3 for each sentence.
Write your essay – paragraph by paragraph
Use the Band 6.5 formulas, linkers and samples from Steps 3–8. Check the Band Standard on the left before you write.
Exercise 5 – Introduction
One sentence. Paraphrase the task (Step 7).
Words: 0 (about 20–30 words)
Exercise 6 – Overview
Use the formula for your band (Step 8).
Words: 0 (about 25–45 words)
Exercise 7 – Body 1 (Stages 1–3)
Write the stages in order with a different linker for each.
Words: 0 (about 55–75 words)
Exercise 8 – Body 2 (Stages 4–6)
Start with a phase change (In the factory / Turning to …).
Words: 0 (about 50–70 words)
Exercise 9 – Your full essay
Press “Collect my paragraphs”, then edit them into one essay and compare with the model.
Words: 0 (minimum 150)
Model Answer 6.5
Write your own essay first, then compare. Highlighted = key collocations to learn.