The Task
The diagram below shows the process of making cheese, from collecting milk to selling the finished cheese.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
1How many stages? Name them.
The diagram has 8 stages. It is a man-made process shown as a linear sequence – from collecting milk to selling the finished cheese in shops.
Phase 1 – Turning milk into curds (Stages 1–4)
- 1Collecting milkFresh milk is collected from dairy cows.
- 2PasteurisingThe milk is heated to 72°C for 15 seconds.
- 3Adding cultures and rennetThe milk goes into a large vat, and cultures and rennet are added.
- 4Forming curdsThe milk thickens into solid curds in liquid whey.
Phase 2 – Turning curds into cheese (Stages 5–8)
- 5Draining the wheyThe liquid whey is drained away from the curds.
- 6Pressing into mouldsThe curds are pressed into moulds.
- 7RipeningThe cheese is stored to ripen for 2–12 months.
- 8SellingThe finished cheese is sold in shops.
3Sentence Formulas
The structure behind each Band 6.5 sentence. Change the band on the left to see another level.
| Stage | Band 4.5 formula |
|---|---|
| 1 Collecting milk | First + N + is + V3 + from + N |
| 2 Pasteurising | Next + N + is + V3 + to + temperature + for + time |
| 3 Adding cultures and rennet | Then + N and N + are + V3 + to + N |
| 4 Forming curds | After that + N + becomes + adj, and + N + are + V3 + in + time |
| 5 Draining the whey | Next + N + is + V3 + away + from + N |
| 6 Pressing into moulds | Then + N + are + V3 + into + N + and + V3 |
| 7 Ripening | After that + N + is + V3 + in + N + for + time |
| 8 Selling | Finally + N + is + V3 + in + N |
| Stage | Band 5.5 formula |
|---|---|
| 1 Collecting milk | To begin with + adj + N + is + V3 + from + adj + N |
| 2 Pasteurising | After that + N + is + V3 + at + temperature + for + time + to + V (purpose) |
| 3 Adding cultures and rennet | Next + N + is + V3 + into + adj + N, and + N and N + are + V3 |
| 4 Forming curds | Then + N + is + V3 + for + time + until + it + becomes + adj + and + N + V |
| 5 Draining the whey | In the second stage + N + is + V3 + from + N |
| 6 Pressing into moulds | After this + N + are + V3 + in + N + and + V3 + into + N |
| 7 Ripening | Then + N + is + V3 + for + time + to + V (purpose) |
| 8 Selling | Finally + adj + N + is + V3 + to + N + and + V3 |
| Stage | Band 6.5 formula |
|---|---|
| 1 Collecting milk | The process begins when + adj + N + is + precise V3 + from + adj + N |
| 2 Pasteurising | Following this + N + is + V3, which means + it + is + V3 + to + temperature + for + time + to + V + adj + N |
| 3 Adding cultures and rennet | Next + N + is + precise V3 + to + adj + N, where + N and N + are + V3 |
| 4 Forming curds | After + time + N + thickens + and separates into + adj + N and adj + N |
| 5 Draining the whey | Turning to the second phase + N + is + phrasal V3 + so that + only + N + remain |
| 6 Pressing into moulds | Next + N + are + V3 + into + N, where + they + are + V3 + into + adj + N |
| 7 Ripening | Following this + N + are left to + V + in + N + for a period of + time |
| 8 Selling | In the final stage + adj + N + is + V3 + to + N, where + it + is + V3 |
| Stage | Band 7.5 formula |
|---|---|
| 1 Collecting milk | The process commences with + the + N + of + adj + N + from + N |
| 2 Pasteurising | Subsequently + N + is + V3 + at + temperature + for + time, a step that + V + adj + N |
| 3 Adding cultures and rennet | Following + N + N + is + V3 + to + N + and + V3 + with + N and N |
| 4 Forming curds | Within + time + N + sets, causing + N + to V + in + N |
| 5 Draining the whey | Turning to the second phase + N + is + phrasal V3, leaving behind + a mass of + N |
| 6 Pressing into moulds | Subsequently + N + are + precise V3 + in + N, giving + N + its + N |
| 7 Ripening | Following this + N + are + precise V3 + in + N + for anywhere between X and Y |
| 8 Selling | In the final stage + the + adverb + adj + N + is + V3 + to + N + for + N |
4Linkers – Sequencing Words & Transitions
Use a different linker for each stage – never “Then … Then … Then”. These are the linkers for Band 6.5.
Beginning
- First
Next step
- Next
- Then
- After that
Ending
- Finally
Joining
- … and + V3 (are taken out and put …)
- to + V (to make)
Beginning
- To begin with
- First of all
Next step
- After that / After this
- Next
- Then
Change of place / phase
- In the second stage, …
- In the factory, …
Ending
- Finally
Joining
- …, and then …
- … called + N
Beginning
- The process begins when …
- The process begins with + N
Next step
- Following this
- Subsequently
- Next
Time clauses
- Once + adj (Once dry, …)
- After + N (After fermentation, …)
Inside a stage
- …, where + clause
- …, which + verb
- … known as + N
- …, a stage which lasts …
Change of phase
- Turning to the … stage, …
Ending
- In the final stage
Beginning
- The process commences with + the + N of + N
Time
- Once + V3 (Once extracted, …)
- Following + N (Following roasting, …)
Next step
- Subsequently
- To complete the … phase, …
Result phrases
- …, leaving only + N
- …, producing + N
- …, resulting in + N
Naming
- … referred to as + N
- … ranging from X to Y
Ending
- In the final stage
- … culminating in + N
5Translation Practice – Vietnamese → English
Translate each sentence into English. The word in ( ) is the key word you must use. Check the Tense note, write your answer, then press Show answer.
Band 4.5 – 8 sentences
Đầu tiên, sữa được thu gom (collected) từ những con bò.
Tiếp theo, sữa được đun nóng (heated) đến 72°C trong 15 giây.
Sau đó, men (cultures) và chất làm đông được thêm vào sữa.
Sau đó, sữa trở nên đặc và các cục sữa đông (curds) được tạo ra trong 30 đến 60 phút.
Tiếp theo, phần chất lỏng được lấy ra (taken away) khỏi sữa đông.
Sau đó, sữa đông được cho vào khuôn (moulds) và ép lại.
Sau đó, phô mai được giữ (kept) trong kho từ 2 đến 12 tháng.
Cuối cùng, phô mai được bán (sold) ở cửa hàng.
Band 5.5 – 8 sentences
Trước tiên, sữa tươi được thu gom từ bò sữa (dairy cows).
Sau đó, sữa được tiệt trùng (pasteurised) ở 72°C trong 15 giây để diệt vi khuẩn.
Tiếp theo, sữa được cho vào một bồn lớn, và men cùng chất làm đông (rennet) được thêm vào.
Sau đó, sữa được để yên từ 30 đến 60 phút cho đến khi (until) nó đặc lại và hình thành các cục sữa đông.
Ở giai đoạn thứ hai, nước whey được chắt (drained) ra khỏi sữa đông.
Sau bước này, sữa đông được đặt vào khuôn và ép thành khối (blocks).
Sau đó, phô mai được lưu kho từ 2 đến 12 tháng để chín (ripen).
Cuối cùng, phô mai thành phẩm được gửi đến (sent to) cửa hàng và bán ra.
Band 6.5 – 8 sentences
Quá trình bắt đầu khi sữa tươi được lấy (obtained) từ bò sữa.
Tiếp theo đó, sữa được tiệt trùng, nghĩa là được đun nóng đến 72°C trong 15 giây để tiêu diệt (destroy) vi khuẩn có hại.
Tiếp theo, sữa được chuyển sang một thùng lớn (vat), nơi men và chất làm đông được thêm vào.
Sau 30 đến 60 phút, sữa đặc lại (thickens) và tách thành sữa đông rắn và nước whey.
Chuyển sang giai đoạn thứ hai, nước whey được chắt ra để (so that) chỉ còn lại sữa đông.
Tiếp theo, sữa đông được nén vào khuôn, nơi (where) chúng được ép thành khối rắn.
Tiếp theo đó, các khối phô mai được để ủ chín (ripen) trong kho trong khoảng 2 đến 12 tháng.
Ở giai đoạn cuối, phô mai đã chín được giao (delivered) đến cửa hàng, nơi nó được bán ra.
Band 7.5 – 8 sentences
Quá trình bắt đầu với việc thu gom sữa tươi từ các đàn bò sữa (dairy herds).
Sau đó, sữa được tiệt trùng ở 72°C trong 15 giây, một bước giúp loại bỏ (eliminates) vi khuẩn có hại.
Sau khi tiệt trùng, sữa được chuyển sang thùng và kết hợp (combined) với men và chất làm đông.
Trong vòng 30 đến 60 phút, hỗn hợp đông lại (sets), khiến các cục sữa đông rắn hình thành trong nước whey.
Chuyển sang giai đoạn thứ hai, nước whey được chắt ra, để lại (leaving behind) một khối sữa đông.
Sau đó, sữa đông được nén (compressed) trong khuôn, tạo hình cho miếng phô mai.
Tiếp theo đó, các khối phô mai được ủ chín (matured) trong kho từ hai đến mười hai tháng.
Ở giai đoạn cuối, phô mai đã ủ chín hoàn toàn được phân phối (distributed) đến các nhà bán lẻ để bán.
6Linker Practice
Part A: drag (or tap) the linkers into the gaps. Part B: translate using the linker in ( ).
Part A – Band 4.5 linkers (8 sentences)
Computer: drag a linker into a gap. Phone: tap a linker, then tap a gap. Tap a filled gap to empty it.
- , milk is collected from cows.
- The milk is heated 72°C for 15 seconds.
- , cultures and rennet are added to the milk.
- The milk becomes thick, curds are made.
- , the curds are put into moulds.
- , the cheese is kept in a store.
- The cheese is kept in a store 2 to 12 months.
- , the cheese is sold in shops.
Part B – Translate with Band 4.5 linkers (5 sentences)
Use the linker in ( ) and follow the Tense note.
Đầu tiên (First), sữa được thu gom từ bò.
Tiếp theo (Next), sữa được đun nóng.
Sau đó (Then), men và chất làm đông được thêm vào.
Sau đó (After that), sữa đông được cho vào khuôn.
Cuối cùng (Finally), phô mai được bán ở cửa hàng.
Part A – Band 5.5 linkers (8 sentences)
Computer: drag a linker into a gap. Phone: tap a linker, then tap a gap. Tap a filled gap to empty it.
- , fresh milk is collected from dairy cows.
- The milk is pasteurised kill bacteria.
- The milk is put into a tank, cultures and rennet are added.
- The milk is left it becomes thick.
- the second stage, the whey is drained.
- this, the curds are placed in moulds.
- The cheese is stored 2 to 12 months.
- , the finished cheese is sent to shops.
Part B – Translate with Band 5.5 linkers (5 sentences)
Use the linker in ( ) and follow the Tense note.
Trước tiên (To begin with), sữa tươi được thu gom từ bò sữa.
Sữa được để yên cho đến khi (until) nó đặc lại.
Ở giai đoạn thứ hai (In the second stage), nước whey được chắt ra.
Sau bước này (After this), sữa đông được cho vào khuôn.
Phô mai được lưu kho để (to) chín.
Part A – Band 6.5 linkers (8 sentences)
Computer: drag a linker into a gap. Phone: tap a linker, then tap a gap. Tap a filled gap to empty it.
- The process begins fresh milk is obtained from cows.
- The milk is pasteurised, means it is heated to 72°C.
- The milk is moved to a vat, cultures and rennet are added.
- 30 to 60 minutes, the milk thickens.
- the second phase, the whey is drained off.
- The whey is drained off that only the curds remain.
- The blocks are left to ripen a period of 2 to 12 months.
- , the cheese is delivered to shops.
Part B – Translate with Band 6.5 linkers (5 sentences)
Use the linker in ( ) and follow the Tense note.
Quá trình bắt đầu khi (when) sữa tươi được lấy từ bò.
Sữa được tiệt trùng, điều đó nghĩa là (which means) nó được đun nóng.
Sữa được chuyển sang thùng, nơi mà (where) men được thêm vào.
Chuyển sang (Turning to) giai đoạn thứ hai, nước whey được chắt ra.
Nước whey được chắt ra để (so that) chỉ còn lại sữa đông.
Part A – Band 7.5 linkers (8 sentences)
Computer: drag a linker into a gap. Phone: tap a linker, then tap a gap. Tap a filled gap to empty it.
- The process commences the collection of fresh milk.
- pasteurisation, the milk is transferred to a vat.
- The mixture sets, solid curds to form.
- The whey is drained off, behind a mass of curds.
- , the curds are compressed in moulds.
- The curds are compressed in moulds, the cheese its shape.
- The blocks are matured for between two and twelve months.
- The cheese is distributed to retailers sale.
Part B – Translate with Band 7.5 linkers (5 sentences)
Use the linker in ( ) and follow the Tense note.
Quá trình bắt đầu với (commences with) việc thu gom sữa tươi.
Sau khi tiệt trùng (Following pasteurisation), sữa được chuyển sang thùng.
Hỗn hợp đông lại, khiến (causing) sữa đông hình thành.
Nước whey được chắt ra, để lại (leaving behind) một khối sữa đông.
Quá trình gồm tám giai đoạn, kết thúc bằng (culminating in) việc bán phô mai.
7Introduction – Paraphrasing the Task
Paraphrase the task sentence. The column of your band is highlighted.
| Task words | Band 4.5 | Band 5.5 | Band 6.5 | Band 7.5 |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| The diagram below shows | The diagram shows | The diagram illustrates | The diagram illustrates | The given diagram depicts |
| the process of making cheese | the steps to make cheese | how cheese is made | how cheese is produced | the process by which cheese is manufactured |
| from collecting milk | from collecting milk | from the collection of milk | starting with the collection of milk | from the collection of fresh milk |
| to selling the finished cheese | to selling the cheese in shops | to the sale of the finished cheese | and ending with the sale of the cheese in shops | to the sale of the matured product |
The diagram shows the steps to make cheese, from collecting milk to selling the cheese in shops.
Band 4.5: clear but copies most of the task words; only small changes (the steps to make).
The diagram illustrates how cheese is made, from the collection of milk to the sale of the finished cheese.
Band 5.5: a common reporting verb (illustrates), a simple how-clause and some paraphrasing (the collection of, the sale of).
The diagram illustrates how cheese is produced, starting with the collection of milk and ending with the sale of the cheese in shops.
Band 6.5: a passive how-clause and a participle phrase (starting with … and ending with …) with nominal phrases.
The given diagram depicts the process by which cheese is manufactured, from the collection of fresh milk to the sale of the matured product.
Band 7.5: precise verb (depicts), a by-which clause and nominalisation (the collection of, the sale of the matured product).
The diagram shows / illustrates / depicts how cheese is made / the process by which cheese is produced, from the collection of milk to the sale of the finished cheese.
8Overview
An overview gives the number of stages and the start and end; higher bands add the two main phases in more precise language. No details (no “72°C”, “15 seconds”, “30–60 minutes”, “2–12 months”, “cultures” or “rennet”).
Band 4.5 formula
Overall, there are eight steps in this process. It starts with collecting milk and finishes with selling the cheese.
Why Band 4.5: Two short simple sentences, basic words (steps, starts, finishes), no phases.
Band 5.5 formula
Overall, there are eight stages in the process. The first four stages turn milk into curds, and the last four turn the curds into cheese. The process begins with collecting milk and ends with the sale of the cheese.
Why Band 5.5: Names the two parts in simple words; begins with … ends with …; no numbers or details.
Band 6.5 formula
Overall, there are eight stages in the process, which can be divided into two main phases: turning milk into curds and turning the curds into cheese. The process begins with the collection of milk and ends with the sale of the finished cheese.
Why Band 6.5: A which-clause divides the stages into two phases; nominal phrases (the harvesting of, the production of).
Band 7.5 formula
Overall, the process comprises eight distinct stages, which fall into two main phases – the conversion of milk into curds and the transformation of curds into cheese – commencing with the collection of milk and culminating in the distribution of cheese to retailers.
Why Band 7.5: comprises · distinct · fall into · dashes for the phases · commencing with … culminating in … in ONE sentence.
9Writing Practice
Essay plan: Introduction → Overview → Body 1: Stages 1–4 (Turning milk into curds) → Body 2: Stages 5–8 (Turning curds into cheese). Your writing is saved on this device.
Exercise 1 – Match the paraphrase
Choose the best synonym for each word from the task.
- shows →
- making →
- collecting →
- selling →
- below →
Exercise 2 – Choose the best Overview
Which sentence is a good overview?
Exercise 3 – Complete Body 1 (Band 4.5)
Type ONE word in each gap. Look at the diagram for the details.
First, milk is from cows. Next, the milk is heated to 72°C for 15 . Then, cultures and are added to the milk. After that, the milk becomes , and curds are made in 30 to minutes.
Exercise 4 – Put Body 2 in order (Band 4.5)
Choose 1–5 for each sentence.
Exercise 3 – Complete Body 1 (Band 5.5)
Type ONE word in each gap. Look at the diagram for the details.
To begin with, fresh milk is collected from cows. After that, the milk is at 72°C for 15 seconds to kill bacteria. Next, the milk is put into a large , and cultures and rennet are added. Then, the milk is left for 30 to 60 minutes it becomes thick and solid form.
Exercise 4 – Put Body 2 in order (Band 5.5)
Choose 1–4 for each sentence.
Exercise 3 – Complete Body 1 (Band 6.5)
Type ONE word in each gap. Look at the diagram for the details.
The process begins fresh milk is obtained from dairy cows. Following this, the milk is pasteurised, means it is heated to 72°C for 15 seconds to destroy harmful . Next, the milk is transferred to a large , where cultures and rennet are added. After 30 to 60 minutes, the milk and separates into solid curds and liquid whey.
Exercise 4 – Put Body 2 in order (Band 6.5)
Choose 1–4 for each sentence.
Exercise 3 – Complete Body 1 (Band 7.5)
Type ONE word in each gap. Look at the diagram for the details.
The process commences with the of fresh milk from dairy herds. Subsequently, the milk is pasteurised at 72°C for 15 seconds, a step that harmful bacteria. Following , it is transferred to a vat and combined with cultures and . Within 30 to 60 minutes, the mixture , causing solid curds to form in the liquid whey.
Exercise 4 – Put Body 2 in order (Band 7.5)
Choose 1–4 for each sentence.
Write your essay – paragraph by paragraph
Use the Band 6.5 formulas, linkers and samples from Steps 3–8. Check the Band Standard on the left before you write.
Exercise 5 – Introduction
One sentence. Paraphrase the task (Step 7).
Words: 0 (about 20–30 words)
Exercise 6 – Overview
Use the formula for your band (Step 8).
Words: 0 (about 25–45 words)
Exercise 7 – Body 1 (Stages 1–4)
Write the stages in order with a different linker for each.
Words: 0 (about 55–75 words)
Exercise 8 – Body 2 (Stages 5–8)
Start with a phase change (In the factory / Turning to …).
Words: 0 (about 50–70 words)
Exercise 9 – Your full essay
Press “Collect my paragraphs”, then edit them into one essay and compare with the model.
Words: 0 (minimum 150)
Model Answer 6.5
Write your own essay first, then compare. Highlighted = key collocations to learn.