The Task
The diagram below shows the life cycle of a chicken, from egg to adult hen.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
1How many stages? Name them.
The diagram has 6 stages. It is a natural process (a life cycle) shown as a cycle: a hen lays an egg, the chick hatches and grows, and the adult hen lays eggs again.
Phase 1 – Inside the egg (Stages 1–3)
- 1Egg laidAn adult hen lays an egg in a nest.
- 2IncubationThe hen keeps the egg warm while a chick develops inside.
- 3HatchingThe chick breaks out of the shell.
Phase 2 – Growing up after hatching (Stages 4–6)
- 4ChickThe young chick is covered in soft down and grows quickly.
- 5Young chickenProper feathers replace the down.
- 6Adult henThe hen is fully grown and starts to lay eggs.
3Sentence Formulas
The structure behind each Band 6.5 sentence. Change the band on the left to see another level.
| Stage | Band 4.5 formula |
|---|---|
| 1 Egg laid | First + N + lays + N + in + N |
| 2 Incubation | Next + N + sits on + N + for about + time + to + V (purpose) |
| 3 Hatching | Then + N + breaks + N + and comes out |
| 4 Chick | In the second part + adj + N + has + adj + adj + N + and grows quickly |
| 5 Young chicken | After that + at about + time + adj + N + gets + adj + N |
| 6 Adult hen | Finally + after about + time + N + becomes + adj + N + and lays + N |
| Stage | Band 5.5 formula |
|---|---|
| 1 Egg laid | To begin with + adj + N + lays + N + in + N |
| 2 Incubation | After that + N + is kept + adj + by + N + for about + time, and + N + grows + inside + it |
| 3 Hatching | Next + N + breaks through + N + and hatches |
| 4 Chick | In the second stage + adverb + V3 + N + is + V3 + in + adj + N + called + N |
| 5 Young chicken | After this + when + S + is + age, its + adj + N + is + V3 + by + adj + N |
| 6 Adult hen | Finally + at about + age + it + is + adverb + adj + N, and + it + starts to + V + N |
| Stage | Band 6.5 formula |
|---|---|
| 1 Egg laid | The cycle begins when + adj + N + lays + N + in + N |
| 2 Incubation | Following this + N + is + precise V3 + by + N + for about + time, during which time + N + develops inside |
| 3 Hatching | Once + adverb + V3 + N + breaks out of + N, a process known as + N |
| 4 Chick | Turning to the + N + adverb + V3 + N + is + V3 + in + adj + adj + N + known as + N |
| 5 Young chicken | By about + time + N + has been + V3 + by + adj + N, and + N + becomes + adj + N |
| 6 Adult hen | In the final stage + N + reaches + N + at around + age + and begins to + V + N, so + the cycle + repeats |
| Stage | Band 7.5 formula |
|---|---|
| 1 Egg laid | The cycle commences with + adj + N + V-ing + N + in + N |
| 2 Incubation | Subsequently + N + is + precise V3 + for roughly + time, during which + the embryo + gradually develops into + N |
| 3 Hatching | Once + adverb + V3 + N + emerges by + V-ing + N, marking the end of + N |
| 4 Chick | Turning to the + N + adverb + V3 + N, adverb + V3 + in + adj + N (reduced clause), grows rapidly |
| 5 Young chicken | By around + time + of age + this + N + has been + V3 + by + adj + N, signalling + N |
| 6 Adult hen | In the final stage + N + reaches + N + at approximately + age, at which point + it + begins to + V + N + of its own, thereby + V-ing + N |
4Linkers – Sequencing Words & Transitions
Use a different linker for each stage – never “Then … Then … Then”. These are the linkers for Band 6.5.
Beginning
- First
Next step
- Next
- Then
- After that
Ending
- Finally
Joining
- … and + V3 (are taken out and put …)
- to + V (to make)
Beginning
- To begin with
- First of all
Next step
- After that / After this
- Next
- Then
Change of place / phase
- In the second stage, …
- In the factory, …
Ending
- Finally
Joining
- …, and then …
- … called + N
Beginning
- The process begins when …
- The process begins with + N
Next step
- Following this
- Subsequently
- Next
Time clauses
- Once + adj (Once dry, …)
- After + N (After fermentation, …)
Inside a stage
- …, where + clause
- …, which + verb
- … known as + N
- …, a stage which lasts …
Change of phase
- Turning to the … stage, …
Ending
- In the final stage
Beginning
- The process commences with + the + N of + N
Time
- Once + V3 (Once extracted, …)
- Following + N (Following roasting, …)
Next step
- Subsequently
- To complete the … phase, …
Result phrases
- …, leaving only + N
- …, producing + N
- …, resulting in + N
Naming
- … referred to as + N
- … ranging from X to Y
Ending
- In the final stage
- … culminating in + N
5Translation Practice – Vietnamese → English
Translate each sentence into English. The word in ( ) is the key word you must use. Check the Tense note, write your answer, then press Show answer.
Band 4.5 – 6 sentences
Đầu tiên, gà mái đẻ (lays) một quả trứng trong ổ.
Tiếp theo, gà mái ấp (sits on) quả trứng khoảng 21 ngày để giữ ấm cho nó.
Sau đó, gà con mổ vỡ (breaks) vỏ trứng và chui ra.
Ở phần thứ hai, gà con có lông tơ mềm (soft) và lớn nhanh.
Sau đó, khoảng sáu tuần tuổi, gà non mọc (gets) lông thật.
Cuối cùng, sau khoảng năm tháng, con gà trở thành (becomes) gà mái trưởng thành và đẻ trứng.
Band 5.5 – 6 sentences
Trước tiên, một con gà mái trưởng thành (adult) đẻ một quả trứng trong ổ.
Sau đó, quả trứng được gà mái giữ ấm khoảng 21 ngày, và một chú gà con lớn lên (grows) bên trong.
Tiếp theo, gà con phá (breaks through) lớp vỏ và nở ra.
Ở giai đoạn thứ hai, gà con mới nở được bao phủ (covered) bởi lớp lông mềm gọi là lông tơ.
Sau bước này, khi khoảng sáu tuần tuổi, lớp lông tơ của nó được thay thế (replaced) bằng lông trưởng thành.
Cuối cùng, khi khoảng năm tháng tuổi, nó là một con gà mái trưởng thành và bắt đầu (starts) đẻ trứng.
Band 6.5 – 6 sentences
Chu trình bắt đầu khi (when) một con gà mái trưởng thành đẻ một quả trứng trong ổ.
Tiếp theo đó, quả trứng được gà mái ấp (incubated) khoảng 21 ngày, trong thời gian đó một chú gà con phát triển bên trong.
Một khi phát triển đầy đủ, gà con phá vỏ chui ra, một quá trình được gọi là nở (hatching).
Chuyển sang giai đoạn tăng trưởng, gà con mới nở được bao phủ bởi lớp lông mềm mịn được gọi là (known as) lông tơ.
Đến khoảng sáu tuần tuổi, lớp lông tơ đã được thay thế bằng lông thật, và con vật trở thành (becomes) một con gà non.
Ở giai đoạn cuối, con gà trưởng thành (reaches adulthood) vào khoảng năm tháng tuổi và bắt đầu đẻ trứng, vì vậy chu trình lặp lại.
Band 7.5 – 6 sentences
Chu trình bắt đầu với việc một con gà mái trưởng thành đẻ trứng (laying an egg) trong ổ.
Sau đó, quả trứng được ấp khoảng ba tuần, trong thời gian đó phôi (embryo) dần phát triển thành gà con.
Một khi đã hình thành hoàn chỉnh, gà con chui ra (emerges) bằng cách phá vỡ vỏ, đánh dấu kết thúc giai đoạn đầu.
Chuyển sang giai đoạn tăng trưởng, gà con mới nở, ban đầu (initially) được phủ lông tơ mềm, lớn lên rất nhanh.
Đến khoảng sáu tuần tuổi, lớp lông tơ này đã được thay bằng lông thật, báo hiệu (signalling) giai đoạn gà non.
Ở giai đoạn cuối, con gà trưởng thành vào khoảng năm tháng tuổi, lúc đó (at which point) nó bắt đầu đẻ trứng, qua đó hoàn thành chu trình.
6Linker Practice
Part A: drag (or tap) the linkers into the gaps. Part B: translate using the linker in ( ).
Part A – Band 4.5 linkers (8 sentences)
Computer: drag a linker into a gap. Phone: tap a linker, then tap a gap. Tap a filled gap to empty it.
- , a hen lays an egg in a nest.
- The hen sits on the egg about 21 days.
- , the chick breaks the shell.
- The chick breaks the shell comes out.
- the second part, the chick grows quickly.
- , the young chicken gets real feathers.
- The chicken becomes an adult hen about five months.
- , the hen lays eggs and the cycle starts again.
Part B – Translate with Band 4.5 linkers (5 sentences)
Use the linker in ( ) and follow the Tense note.
Đầu tiên (First), gà mái đẻ một quả trứng.
Tiếp theo (Next), gà mái ấp trứng khoảng 21 ngày.
Sau đó (Then), gà con chui ra khỏi vỏ.
Sau đó (After that), gà non mọc lông thật.
Cuối cùng (Finally), gà mái trưởng thành đẻ trứng.
Part A – Band 5.5 linkers (8 sentences)
Computer: drag a linker into a gap. Phone: tap a linker, then tap a gap. Tap a filled gap to empty it.
- , an adult hen lays an egg in a nest.
- The egg is kept warm by the hen, a chick grows inside it.
- , the chick breaks through the shell.
- the second stage, the chick is covered in soft feathers.
- The chick is covered in soft feathers down.
- this, its down is replaced by adult feathers.
- it is about six weeks old, it gets adult feathers.
- , the hen starts to lay eggs.
Part B – Translate with Band 5.5 linkers (5 sentences)
Use the linker in ( ) and follow the Tense note.
Trước tiên (To begin with), một con gà mái trưởng thành đẻ trứng.
Quả trứng được giữ ấm, và (and) một chú gà con lớn lên bên trong.
Ở giai đoạn thứ hai (In the second stage), gà con được phủ lông mềm.
Gà con có lông mềm gọi là (called) lông tơ.
Khi (When) khoảng sáu tuần tuổi, gà non mọc lông trưởng thành.
Part A – Band 6.5 linkers (8 sentences)
Computer: drag a linker into a gap. Phone: tap a linker, then tap a gap. Tap a filled gap to empty it.
- The cycle begins an adult hen lays an egg.
- The egg is incubated for 21 days, during time a chick develops.
- fully developed, the chick breaks out of the shell.
- This is a process as hatching.
- the growth phase, the chick is covered in down.
- about six weeks, the down has been replaced.
- The bird begins to lay eggs, the cycle repeats.
- , the bird reaches adulthood.
Part B – Translate with Band 6.5 linkers (5 sentences)
Use the linker in ( ) and follow the Tense note.
Chu trình bắt đầu khi (when) gà mái đẻ một quả trứng.
Trứng được ấp 21 ngày, trong thời gian đó (during which time) gà con phát triển.
Một khi (Once) đã phát triển đầy đủ, gà con phá vỏ chui ra.
Chuyển sang (Turning to) giai đoạn tăng trưởng, gà con lớn rất nhanh.
Gà mái bắt đầu đẻ trứng, vì vậy (so) chu trình lặp lại.
Part A – Band 7.5 linkers (8 sentences)
Computer: drag a linker into a gap. Phone: tap a linker, then tap a gap. Tap a filled gap to empty it.
- The cycle commences an adult hen laying an egg.
- , the egg is incubated for roughly three weeks.
- The chick emerges breaking through the shell.
- The chick emerges, the end of the first phase.
- The chick, covered in soft down, grows rapidly.
- The down is replaced, the young chicken stage.
- The bird matures at five months, at point it lays eggs.
- The hen lays eggs, completing the cycle.
Part B – Translate with Band 7.5 linkers (5 sentences)
Use the linker in ( ) and follow the Tense note.
Chu trình bắt đầu với (commences with) việc gà mái đẻ trứng.
Sau đó (Subsequently), quả trứng được ấp khoảng ba tuần.
Gà con chui ra, đánh dấu (marking) kết thúc giai đoạn đầu.
Gà con, ban đầu (initially) được phủ lông tơ, lớn rất nhanh.
Con gà trưởng thành lúc năm tháng, lúc đó (at which point) nó đẻ trứng.
7Introduction – Paraphrasing the Task
Paraphrase the task sentence. The column of your band is highlighted.
| Task words | Band 4.5 | Band 5.5 | Band 6.5 | Band 7.5 |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| The diagram below shows | The diagram shows | The diagram illustrates | The diagram illustrates | The given diagram depicts |
| the life cycle of a chicken | the life cycle of a chicken | the life cycle of a chicken | the different stages in the life of a chicken | the successive stages in the life cycle of a chicken |
| from egg | from an egg | from the time an egg is laid | from the laying of an egg | tracing its development from a single egg |
| to adult hen | to an adult hen | until the chicken becomes an adult hen | to the development of an adult hen | to a mature, egg-laying hen |
The diagram shows the life cycle of a chicken, from an egg to an adult hen that lays eggs.
Band 4.5: clear but copies most of the task words; only a short added phrase (that lays eggs).
The diagram illustrates the life cycle of a chicken, from the time an egg is laid until the chicken becomes an adult hen.
Band 5.5: a common reporting verb (illustrates) and two time clauses (from the time …, until …) that paraphrase the task.
The diagram illustrates the different stages in the life of a chicken, from the laying of an egg to the development of an adult hen.
Band 6.5: a clear noun phrase (the different stages in the life) and nominalisation (the laying of, the development of).
The given diagram depicts the successive stages in the life cycle of a chicken, tracing its development from a single egg to a mature, egg-laying hen.
Band 7.5: precise verb (depicts), academic noun phrase (the successive stages), a participle clause (tracing its development …) and a compound adjective (egg-laying).
The diagram shows / illustrates / depicts the life cycle / the stages in the life of a chicken, from the laying of an egg to an adult hen.
8Overview
An overview gives the number of stages and the start and end; higher bands add the two main phases in more precise language. No details (no “21 days”, “6 weeks”, “5 months” or “down”).
Band 4.5 formula
Overall, there are six steps in this life cycle. It starts with a hen laying an egg and finishes with a new adult hen, so it is a cycle.
Why Band 4.5: Two short simple sentences, basic words (steps, starts, finishes), no phases.
Band 5.5 formula
Overall, there are six stages in the life cycle. The first three stages happen inside the egg, and the last three happen after the chick hatches. The cycle begins with an egg being laid and ends with an adult hen laying eggs, so it is a cyclical process.
Why Band 5.5: Names the two parts in simple words; begins with … ends with …; no numbers or details.
Band 6.5 formula
Overall, there are six stages in the life cycle, which can be divided into two main phases: development inside the egg and growth after hatching. The cycle begins with the laying of an egg and ends with an adult hen producing eggs of her own, so it is a cyclical process.
Why Band 6.5: A which-clause divides the stages into two phases; nominal phrases (the harvesting of, the production of).
Band 7.5 formula
Overall, the life cycle comprises six distinct stages, which fall into two main phases – development inside the egg and growth after hatching – commencing with the laying of an egg and culminating in the emergence of an adult hen capable of producing eggs, from where the cycle repeats.
Why Band 7.5: comprises · distinct · fall into · dashes for the phases · commencing with … culminating in … in ONE sentence.
9Writing Practice
Essay plan: Introduction → Overview → Body 1: Stages 1–3 (Inside the egg) → Body 2: Stages 4–6 (Growing up after hatching). Your writing is saved on this device.
Exercise 1 – Match the paraphrase
Choose the best synonym for each word from the task.
- shows →
- life cycle →
- egg →
- adult hen →
- below →
Exercise 2 – Choose the best Overview
Which sentence is a good overview?
Exercise 3 – Complete Body 1 (Band 4.5)
Type ONE word in each gap. Look at the diagram for the details.
First, a hen an egg in a nest. Next, the hen sits on the egg for about days to keep it . During this time, a chick grows inside the egg. Then, the chick breaks the and comes .
Exercise 4 – Put Body 2 in order (Band 4.5)
Choose 1–4 for each sentence.
Exercise 3 – Complete Body 1 (Band 5.5)
Type ONE word in each gap. Look at the diagram for the details.
To begin with, an hen lays an egg in a nest. After that, the egg is kept by the hen for about 21 days, and a chick inside it. Next, the chick breaks the shell and .
Exercise 4 – Put Body 2 in order (Band 5.5)
Choose 1–3 for each sentence.
Exercise 3 – Complete Body 1 (Band 6.5)
Type ONE word in each gap. Look at the diagram for the details.
The cycle begins an adult hen lays an egg in a nest. Following this, the egg is by the hen for about 21 days, during time a chick develops inside. Once fully developed, the chick breaks of the shell, a process known as .
Exercise 4 – Put Body 2 in order (Band 6.5)
Choose 1–3 for each sentence.
Exercise 3 – Complete Body 1 (Band 7.5)
Type ONE word in each gap. Look at the diagram for the details.
The cycle commences with an adult hen an egg in a nest. Subsequently, the egg is incubated for roughly three , during which the gradually develops into a chick. Once fully formed, the chick by breaking through the shell, the end of the first phase.
Exercise 4 – Put Body 2 in order (Band 7.5)
Choose 1–3 for each sentence.
Write your essay – paragraph by paragraph
Use the Band 6.5 formulas, linkers and samples from Steps 3–8. Check the Band Standard on the left before you write.
Exercise 5 – Introduction
One sentence. Paraphrase the task (Step 7).
Words: 0 (about 20–30 words)
Exercise 6 – Overview
Use the formula for your band (Step 8).
Words: 0 (about 25–45 words)
Exercise 7 – Body 1 (Stages 1–3)
Write the stages in order with a different linker for each.
Words: 0 (about 55–75 words)
Exercise 8 – Body 2 (Stages 4–6)
Start with a phase change (In the factory / Turning to …).
Words: 0 (about 50–70 words)
Exercise 9 – Your full essay
Press “Collect my paragraphs”, then edit them into one essay and compare with the model.
Words: 0 (minimum 150)
Model Answer 6.5
Write your own essay first, then compare. Highlighted = key collocations to learn.