The Task
The diagram below shows the stages in the production of chocolate, from harvesting cocoa pods to making liquid chocolate.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
1How many stages? Name them.
The diagram has 8 stages. It is a man-made process shown as a linear sequence – from harvesting cocoa pods on a farm to producing liquid chocolate in a factory.
Phase 1 – On the cocoa farm (Stages 1–4)
- 1Harvesting cocoa podsRipe cocoa pods are cut from cocoa trees.
- 2Fermenting the beansThe beans are taken out of the pods and left to ferment in wooden boxes.
- 3Drying in the sunThe beans are spread out and dried in the sun.
- 4Packing and transportThe dry beans are packed into sacks and taken to a factory.
Phase 2 – In the chocolate factory (Stages 5–8)
- 5RoastingThe beans are roasted in an oven at 120–150°C.
- 6Removing the shellsA machine cracks the beans and removes the shells, leaving cocoa nibs.
- 7GrindingThe nibs are ground into a thick paste called cocoa liquor.
- 8MixingThe paste is mixed with sugar and milk to make liquid chocolate.
3Sentence Formulas
The structure behind each Band 6.5 sentence. Change the band on the left to see another level.
| Stage | Band 4.5 formula |
|---|---|
| 1 Harvesting cocoa pods | First + N + are + V3 + from + N |
| 2 Fermenting the beans | Next + N + are + V3 + out of + N + and + V3 + in + N + for + time |
| 3 Drying in the sun | Then + N + are + V3 + in + N + for about + time |
| 4 Packing and transport | After that + adj + N + are + V3 + into + N + and + V3 + to + N |
| 5 Roasting | In the + place + N + are + V3 + at + temperature |
| 6 Removing the shells | Next + N + are + V3 + from + N |
| 7 Grinding | After that + N + are + V3 + into + adj + N |
| 8 Mixing | Finally + N and N + are + V3 + to + N + to + V (purpose) |
| Stage | Band 5.5 formula |
|---|---|
| 1 Harvesting cocoa pods | To begin with + adj + N + are + V3 + from + N |
| 2 Fermenting the beans | After that + N + are + V3 + from + N + and left to + V + in + N + for + time |
| 3 Drying in the sun | Next + they + are + phrasal V3 + and + V3 + in + N + for about + time |
| 4 Packing and transport | Then + the + V3 + N + are + V3 + into + N + and + V3 + to + N |
| 5 Roasting | In the second stage + N + are + V3 + in + N + at a temperature of + number |
| 6 Removing the shells | After this + a machine + cracks + N, and + N + are + V3 |
| 7 Grinding | Then + N + are + V3 + into + adj + adj + N + called + N |
| 8 Mixing | Finally + N + is + V3 + with + N and N, and + N + is + V3 |
| Stage | Band 6.5 formula |
|---|---|
| 1 Harvesting cocoa pods | The process begins when + adj + N + are + precise V3 + from + N + on + place |
| 2 Fermenting the beans | Following this + N + are + precise V3 + from + N + and left to + V + in + N, a stage which + V + time |
| 3 Drying in the sun | After + N + N + are + V3 + out to + V + in + N + for approximately + time |
| 4 Packing and transport | Once + adj + N + are + V3 + into + N + and + precise V3 + to + N + for + N |
| 5 Roasting | Turning to the + N + N + are + V3 + in + adj + N + at a temperature of between X and Y |
| 6 Removing the shells | Next + the + V3 + N + are + V3 + by + N, which + separates + N + from + N, known as + N |
| 7 Grinding | Subsequently + N + are + V3 + into + adj + N + known as + N |
| 8 Mixing | In the final stage + N + is + V3 + with + N and N + to produce + N |
| Stage | Band 7.5 formula |
|---|---|
| 1 Harvesting cocoa pods | The process commences with + the + N-ing + of + adj + N + from + N + on + N |
| 2 Fermenting the beans | Once + V3 + from + N + N + are + V3 + in + N + to V + for a period of + time |
| 3 Drying in the sun | Subsequently + the + V3 + N + are + V3 + out to V + in + N + over the course of + time |
| 4 Packing and transport | To complete the + N + the + V3 + N + are + precise V3 + and + V3 + to + N |
| 5 Roasting | Turning to the + N + N + are + V3 + at temperatures ranging from X to Y |
| 6 Removing the shells | Following + N + N + are + V3 + open + their + N + V3 (ellipsis), leaving only + N |
| 7 Grinding | Subsequently + these + N + are + adverb + V3, producing + adj + N + referred to as + N |
| 8 Mixing | In the final stage + this + N + is + precise V3 + with + N and N, resulting in + the finished product: N |
4Linkers – Sequencing Words & Transitions
Use a different linker for each stage – never “Then … Then … Then”. These are the linkers for Band 6.5.
Beginning
- First
Next step
- Next
- Then
- After that
Ending
- Finally
Joining
- … and + V3 (are taken out and put …)
- to + V (to make)
Beginning
- To begin with
- First of all
Next step
- After that / After this
- Next
- Then
Change of place / phase
- In the second stage, …
- In the factory, …
Ending
- Finally
Joining
- …, and then …
- … called + N
Beginning
- The process begins when …
- The process begins with + N
Next step
- Following this
- Subsequently
- Next
Time clauses
- Once + adj (Once dry, …)
- After + N (After fermentation, …)
Inside a stage
- …, where + clause
- …, which + verb
- … known as + N
- …, a stage which lasts …
Change of phase
- Turning to the … stage, …
Ending
- In the final stage
Beginning
- The process commences with + the + N of + N
Time
- Once + V3 (Once extracted, …)
- Following + N (Following roasting, …)
Next step
- Subsequently
- To complete the … phase, …
Result phrases
- …, leaving only + N
- …, producing + N
- …, resulting in + N
Naming
- … referred to as + N
- … ranging from X to Y
Ending
- In the final stage
- … culminating in + N
5Translation Practice – Vietnamese → English
Translate each sentence into English. The word in ( ) is the key word you must use. Check the Tense note, write your answer, then press Show answer.
Band 4.5 – 8 sentences
Đầu tiên, quả ca cao được hái (picked) từ cây ca cao.
Tiếp theo, hạt được lấy ra khỏi quả và cho vào thùng gỗ (wooden boxes) trong năm đến bảy ngày.
Sau đó, hạt được phơi khô (dried) dưới nắng khoảng một tuần.
Sau đó, hạt khô được cho vào bao (sacks) và đưa đến nhà máy.
Ở nhà máy, hạt được rang (roasted) ở nhiệt độ từ 120 đến 150°C.
Tiếp theo, vỏ (shells) được bóc khỏi hạt.
Sau đó, hạt được xay (ground) thành một hỗn hợp sệt.
Cuối cùng, đường và sữa được thêm (added) vào hỗn hợp để làm sô-cô-la lỏng.
Band 5.5 – 8 sentences
Trước tiên, những quả ca cao chín (ripe) được cắt khỏi cây.
Sau đó, hạt được tách (removed) khỏi quả và để lên men trong thùng gỗ từ năm đến bảy ngày.
Tiếp theo, chúng được trải ra (spread out) và phơi khô dưới nắng khoảng một tuần.
Sau đó, hạt đã phơi khô được đóng bao và vận chuyển (transported) đến nhà máy sô-cô-la.
Ở giai đoạn thứ hai, hạt được rang trong lò ở nhiệt độ (temperature) từ 120 đến 150°C.
Sau bước này, máy làm vỡ (cracks) hạt và vỏ được loại bỏ.
Sau đó, hạt được xay thành một hỗn hợp sệt màu nâu gọi là (called) cocoa liquor.
Cuối cùng, hỗn hợp được trộn (mixed) với đường và sữa, và sô-cô-la lỏng được tạo ra.
Band 6.5 – 8 sentences
Quá trình bắt đầu khi những quả ca cao chín được thu hoạch (harvested) từ cây ca cao ở trang trại.
Tiếp theo đó, hạt được lấy ra (extracted) khỏi quả và để lên men trong thùng gỗ, giai đoạn này kéo dài năm đến bảy ngày.
Sau khi lên men (fermentation), hạt được trải ra để phơi khô dưới nắng khoảng một tuần.
Một khi đã khô, hạt được đóng bao và chuyển (shipped) đến nhà máy sô-cô-la để chế biến.
Chuyển sang giai đoạn ở nhà máy (factory), hạt được rang trong lò lớn ở nhiệt độ từ 120 đến 150°C.
Tiếp theo, hạt đã rang được máy làm vỡ, máy này tách (separates) vỏ khỏi phần nhân, được gọi là cocoa nibs.
Sau đó, nhân ca cao được xay thành một hỗn hợp sệt được biết đến là (known as) cocoa liquor.
Ở giai đoạn cuối, cocoa liquor được trộn với đường và sữa để tạo ra (produce) sô-cô-la lỏng.
Band 7.5 – 8 sentences
Quá trình bắt đầu với việc thu hoạch những quả ca cao chín từ cây ca cao tại các đồn điền (plantations).
Một khi được lấy ra khỏi quả, hạt được đặt vào thùng gỗ để lên men (ferment) trong khoảng năm đến bảy ngày.
Sau đó, những hạt đã lên men (fermented) được bày ra phơi dưới nắng trong khoảng một tuần.
Để hoàn tất giai đoạn ở trang trại, hạt khô được đóng bao và gửi đi (dispatched) đến nhà máy sô-cô-la.
Chuyển sang giai đoạn sản xuất, hạt được rang ở nhiệt độ dao động (ranging) từ 120 đến 150°C.
Sau khi rang, hạt được tách ra và vỏ bị loại bỏ (discarded), chỉ còn lại nhân ca cao.
Sau đó, những nhân này được xay mịn (finely ground), tạo ra một hỗn hợp sệt được gọi là cocoa liquor.
Ở giai đoạn cuối, hỗn hợp này được pha trộn (blended) với đường và sữa, tạo ra thành phẩm: sô-cô-la lỏng.
6Linker Practice
Part A: drag (or tap) the linkers into the gaps. Part B: translate using the linker in ( ).
Part A – Band 4.5 linkers (8 sentences)
Computer: drag a linker into a gap. Phone: tap a linker, then tap a gap. Tap a filled gap to empty it.
- , cocoa pods are picked from cocoa trees.
- The beans are taken out of the pods put in wooden boxes.
- The beans stay in the boxes five to seven days.
- , the beans are dried in the sun.
- Trucks are used take the beans to a factory.
- , the beans are roasted at 120 to 150°C.
- , the beans are ground into a thick paste.
- , sugar and milk are added to make liquid chocolate.
Part B – Translate with Band 4.5 linkers (5 sentences)
Use the linker in ( ) and follow the Tense note.
Đầu tiên (First), quả ca cao được hái từ cây.
Tiếp theo (Next), hạt được cho vào thùng gỗ.
Sau đó (Then), hạt được phơi khô dưới nắng.
Sau đó (After that), hạt được rang ở nhà máy.
Cuối cùng (Finally), đường và sữa được thêm vào.
Part A – Band 5.5 linkers (8 sentences)
Computer: drag a linker into a gap. Phone: tap a linker, then tap a gap. Tap a filled gap to empty it.
- , ripe cocoa pods are cut from the trees.
- The beans are removed from the pods and left ferment.
- that, they are dried in the sun for about a week.
- The dried beans are packed into sacks and transported to a factory.
- the second stage, the beans are roasted in an oven.
- A machine cracks the beans, the shells are removed.
- The beans are ground into a thick paste cocoa liquor.
- , the paste is mixed with sugar and milk.
Part B – Translate with Band 5.5 linkers (5 sentences)
Use the linker in ( ) and follow the Tense note.
Trước tiên (To begin with), quả ca cao chín được cắt khỏi cây.
Hạt được để lên men trong năm đến bảy ngày, và sau đó (then) được phơi khô.
Ở giai đoạn thứ hai (In the second stage), hạt được rang trong lò.
Sau bước này (After this), vỏ hạt được loại bỏ.
Hạt được xay thành một hỗn hợp sệt gọi là (called) cocoa liquor.
Part A – Band 6.5 linkers (8 sentences)
Computer: drag a linker into a gap. Phone: tap a linker, then tap a gap. Tap a filled gap to empty it.
- The process begins ripe cocoa pods are harvested.
- The beans are left in wooden boxes, they ferment for five to seven days.
- fermentation, the beans are spread out to dry.
- dry, the beans are packed into sacks.
- the factory stage, the beans are roasted.
- The beans are cracked by a machine, separates the shells.
- The nibs are ground into a paste as cocoa liquor.
- The liquor is mixed with sugar and milk produce liquid chocolate.
Part B – Translate with Band 6.5 linkers (5 sentences)
Use the linker in ( ) and follow the Tense note.
Quá trình bắt đầu khi (when) quả ca cao chín được thu hoạch.
Hạt được để trong thùng gỗ, nơi mà (where) chúng lên men.
Một khi (Once) đã khô, hạt được đóng bao.
Chuyển sang (Turning to) giai đoạn ở nhà máy, hạt được rang.
Hạt được máy làm vỡ, máy này (which) tách vỏ ra.
Part A – Band 7.5 linkers (8 sentences)
Computer: drag a linker into a gap. Phone: tap a linker, then tap a gap. Tap a filled gap to empty it.
- The process commences the harvesting of ripe cocoa pods.
- extracted from the pods, the beans are placed in boxes to ferment.
- , the fermented beans are laid out to dry in the sun.
- the manufacturing phase, the beans are roasted.
- The beans are roasted at temperatures from 120 to 150°C.
- The shells are discarded, only the cocoa nibs behind.
- The nibs are finely ground, a thick paste.
- The liquor is blended with sugar and milk, in liquid chocolate.
Part B – Translate with Band 7.5 linkers (5 sentences)
Use the linker in ( ) and follow the Tense note.
Quá trình bắt đầu với (commences with) việc thu hoạch quả ca cao chín.
Một khi (Once) được lấy ra khỏi quả, hạt được để lên men.
Vỏ bị loại bỏ, chỉ để lại (leaving) nhân ca cao.
Nhân được xay mịn, tạo ra (producing) một hỗn hợp sệt.
Quá trình gồm tám giai đoạn, kết thúc bằng (culminating in) việc tạo ra sô-cô-la lỏng.
7Introduction – Paraphrasing the Task
Paraphrase the task sentence. The column of your band is highlighted.
| Task words | Band 4.5 | Band 5.5 | Band 6.5 | Band 7.5 |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| The diagram below shows | The diagram shows | The diagram illustrates | The diagram illustrates | The given diagram depicts |
| the stages in the production of chocolate | the steps to make chocolate | how chocolate is made | how chocolate is produced | the process by which chocolate is manufactured |
| from harvesting cocoa pods | from picking cocoa pods | from the picking of cocoa pods | starting with the harvesting of cocoa pods | from the harvesting of cocoa pods on a farm |
| to making liquid chocolate | to making liquid chocolate | to the production of liquid chocolate | and ending with liquid chocolate | to the creation of liquid chocolate in a factory |
The diagram shows the steps to make chocolate, from picking cocoa pods to making liquid chocolate.
Band 4.5: clear but copies most of the task words; only small changes (the steps to make, picking).
The diagram illustrates how chocolate is made, from the picking of cocoa pods to the production of liquid chocolate.
Band 5.5: a common reporting verb (illustrates), a simple how-clause and some paraphrasing (the picking of, the production of).
The diagram illustrates how chocolate is produced, starting with the harvesting of cocoa pods and ending with liquid chocolate.
Band 6.5: a passive how-clause and a participle phrase (starting with … and ending with …) with a precise verb (harvesting).
The given diagram depicts the process by which chocolate is manufactured, from the harvesting of cocoa pods on a farm to the creation of liquid chocolate in a factory.
Band 7.5: precise verb (depicts), a by-which clause, nominalisation (the harvesting of, the creation of) and accurate added detail (on a farm, in a factory).
The diagram shows / illustrates / depicts how chocolate is made / the process by which chocolate is produced, from the picking / harvesting of cocoa pods to the production of liquid chocolate.
8Overview
An overview gives the number of stages and the start and end; higher bands add the two main phases in more precise language. No details (no “5–7 days”, “1 week”, “120–150°C”, “sugar” or “milk”).
Band 4.5 formula
Overall, there are eight steps in this process. It starts with picking cocoa pods and finishes with making liquid chocolate.
Why Band 4.5: Two short simple sentences, basic words (steps, starts, finishes), no phases.
Band 5.5 formula
Overall, there are eight stages in the process. The first four stages happen on a farm, and the last four happen in a factory. The process begins with picking cocoa pods and ends with the production of liquid chocolate.
Why Band 5.5: Names the two parts in simple words; begins with … ends with …; no numbers or details.
Band 6.5 formula
Overall, there are eight stages in the process, which can be divided into two main phases: preparing the beans on a farm and processing them in a factory. The process begins with the harvesting of cocoa pods and ends with the production of liquid chocolate.
Why Band 6.5: A which-clause divides the stages into two phases; nominal phrases (the harvesting of, the production of).
Band 7.5 formula
Overall, the process comprises eight distinct stages, which fall into two main phases – bean preparation on a cocoa farm and manufacturing in a factory – commencing with the harvesting of ripe pods and culminating in the production of liquid chocolate.
Why Band 7.5: comprises · distinct · fall into · dashes for the phases · commencing with … culminating in … in ONE sentence.
9Writing Practice
Essay plan: Introduction → Overview → Body 1: Stages 1–4 (On the cocoa farm) → Body 2: Stages 5–8 (In the chocolate factory). Your writing is saved on this device.
Exercise 1 – Match the paraphrase
Choose the best synonym for each word from the task.
- shows →
- the production of →
- harvesting →
- making →
- below →
Exercise 2 – Choose the best Overview
Which sentence is a good overview?
Exercise 3 – Complete Body 1 (Band 4.5)
Type ONE word in each gap. Look at the diagram for the details.
First, cocoa pods are from cocoa trees on a farm. Next, the beans are taken out of the and put in wooden boxes for five to days. Then, the beans are in the sun for about one week. After that, the dry beans are put into and taken to a factory.
Exercise 4 – Put Body 2 in order (Band 4.5)
Choose 1–5 for each sentence.
Exercise 3 – Complete Body 1 (Band 5.5)
Type ONE word in each gap. Look at the diagram for the details.
To begin with, ripe cocoa pods are from the trees. After that, the beans are removed from the pods and left to in wooden boxes for five to seven days. Next, they are spread out and in the sun for about a . Then, the dried beans are packed into sacks and to a chocolate factory.
Exercise 4 – Put Body 2 in order (Band 5.5)
Choose 1–4 for each sentence.
Exercise 3 – Complete Body 1 (Band 6.5)
Type ONE word in each gap. Look at the diagram for the details.
The process begins ripe cocoa pods are harvested from cocoa trees on a farm. Following this, the beans are from the pods and left to ferment in wooden boxes, a stage lasts five to seven days. After fermentation, the beans are spread out to in the sun for approximately one week. dry, they are packed into sacks and shipped to a chocolate factory for processing.
Exercise 4 – Put Body 2 in order (Band 6.5)
Choose 1–4 for each sentence.
Exercise 3 – Complete Body 1 (Band 7.5)
Type ONE word in each gap. Look at the diagram for the details.
The process commences with the of ripe cocoa pods from cocoa trees on plantations. Once from the pods, the beans are placed in wooden boxes to ferment for a of five to seven days. , the fermented beans are laid out to dry in the sun over the of about a week. To complete the farm phase, the dried beans are bagged and to a chocolate factory.
Exercise 4 – Put Body 2 in order (Band 7.5)
Choose 1–4 for each sentence.
Write your essay – paragraph by paragraph
Use the Band 6.5 formulas, linkers and samples from Steps 3–8. Check the Band Standard on the left before you write.
Exercise 5 – Introduction
One sentence. Paraphrase the task (Step 7).
Words: 0 (about 20–30 words)
Exercise 6 – Overview
Use the formula for your band (Step 8).
Words: 0 (about 25–45 words)
Exercise 7 – Body 1 (Stages 1–4)
Write the stages in order with a different linker for each.
Words: 0 (about 55–75 words)
Exercise 8 – Body 2 (Stages 5–8)
Start with a phase change (In the factory / Turning to …).
Words: 0 (about 50–70 words)
Exercise 9 – Your full essay
Press “Collect my paragraphs”, then edit them into one essay and compare with the model.
Words: 0 (minimum 150)
Model Answer 6.5
Write your own essay first, then compare. Highlighted = key collocations to learn.