The Task
The diagram below shows the life cycle of a worker honeybee, from egg to forager.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
1How many stages? Name them.
The diagram has 8 stages. It is a natural process (a life cycle) shown as a linear sequence for one worker bee – from an egg laid by the queen to a forager collecting food.
Phase 1 – Development inside the cell (Stages 1–5)
- 1Egg layingThe queen lays an egg in a wax cell.
- 2HatchingThe egg hatches into a larva.
- 3Fed by nurse beesNurse bees feed the larva.
- 4Cell capped by workersWorkers seal the cell with wax.
- 5PupationThe pupa develops in the sealed cell.
Phase 2 – Adult life (Stages 6–8)
- 6EmergingThe adult bee leaves the cell.
- 7Working in the hiveCleaning cells, feeding larvae.
- 8ForagingCollecting food outside the hive.
3Sentence Formulas
The structure behind each Band 6.5 sentence. Change the band on the left to see another level.
| Stage | Band 4.5 formula |
|---|---|
| 1 Egg laying | First + N + lays + N + in + N |
| 2 Hatching | Next + after about + time + N + becomes + adj + N |
| 3 Fed by nurse bees | Then + adj + N + give + N + N, N and N + for about + time |
| 4 Cell capped by workers | After that + adj + N + cover + N + with + N |
| 5 Pupation | Next + N + changes into + N + and stays + in + adj + N + for about + time |
| 6 Emerging | In the second part + adj + N + comes out of + N + on about + day |
| 7 Working in the hive | After that + it + works + in + N + for about + time + and cleans + N |
| 8 Foraging | Finally + it + flies out of + N + to + V + N and N + from + N |
| Stage | Band 5.5 formula |
|---|---|
| 1 Egg laying | To begin with + N + lays + a single + N + in + adj + N |
| 2 Hatching | After about + time + N + hatches into + N |
| 3 Fed by nurse bees | Next + N + is + V3 + with + N, N and N + by + agent + for about + time |
| 4 Cell capped by workers | After that + N + is + V3 + with + N + by + agent |
| 5 Pupation | Then + N + turns into + N, which + develops + inside + adj + N + for about + time |
| 6 Emerging | In the adult stage + adj + N + comes out of + N + on about + day |
| 7 Working in the hive | After that + it + works + inside + N + for about + time, where + it + cleans + N and feeds + adj + N |
| 8 Foraging | Finally + it + becomes + N + and flies out + to + V + N and N |
| Stage | Band 6.5 formula |
|---|---|
| 1 Egg laying | The cycle begins when + N + precise V(s) + N + in + adj + N |
| 2 Hatching | Approximately + time + later + N + hatches into + adj + N |
| 3 Fed by nurse bees | During the following + time + N + is + precise V3 + by + agent, which + supply it with + N and then N and N |
| 4 Cell capped by workers | Once + S + is + adverb + adj + N + is + precise V3 + with + N + by + agent |
| 5 Pupation | Inside the + adj + N + N + develops into + N, a stage which + V + around + time |
| 6 Emerging | Turning to the adult phase + adj + N + emerges from + N + on around + day |
| 7 Working in the hive | For approximately + time + it + remains + inside + N, where + it + cleans + N and tends + N |
| 8 Foraging | In the final stage + N + becomes + N, which + collects + N and N + from + N and brings + them + back to + N |
| Stage | Band 7.5 formula |
|---|---|
| 1 Egg laying | The life cycle commences with + N + V-ing + a single + N + in + adj + N |
| 2 Hatching | Roughly + time + later + this + N + hatches into + adj + N, marking the start of + N |
| 3 Fed by nurse bees | Over the next + time + N + is + V3 + by + agent, initially with + N and subsequently with + N and N |
| 4 Cell capped by workers | Once + adverb + adj + N + is + V3 + inside + N + beneath + N + by + agent |
| 5 Pupation | V3 + beneath + this + N (reduced clause) + it + undergoes + metamorphosis into + N, a stage + V-ing + roughly + time |
| 6 Emerging | Turning to the adult phase + the + adverb + V3 + N + emerges from + N + on around + day |
| 7 Working in the hive | For approximately the next + time + it + remains + inside + N, performing + N + such as + V-ing and V-ing |
| 8 Foraging | In the final stage + N + becomes + N, V-ing participle + out of + N + to + V + N and N |
4Linkers – Sequencing Words & Transitions
Use a different linker for each stage – never “Then … Then … Then”. These are the linkers for Band 6.5.
Beginning
- First
Next step
- Next
- Then
- After that
Ending
- Finally
Joining
- … and + V3 (are taken out and put …)
- to + V (to make)
Beginning
- To begin with
- First of all
Next step
- After that / After this
- Next
- Then
Change of place / phase
- In the second stage, …
- In the factory, …
Ending
- Finally
Joining
- …, and then …
- … called + N
Beginning
- The process begins when …
- The process begins with + N
Next step
- Following this
- Subsequently
- Next
Time clauses
- Once + adj (Once dry, …)
- After + N (After fermentation, …)
Inside a stage
- …, where + clause
- …, which + verb
- … known as + N
- …, a stage which lasts …
Change of phase
- Turning to the … stage, …
Ending
- In the final stage
Beginning
- The process commences with + the + N of + N
Time
- Once + V3 (Once extracted, …)
- Following + N (Following roasting, …)
Next step
- Subsequently
- To complete the … phase, …
Result phrases
- …, leaving only + N
- …, producing + N
- …, resulting in + N
Naming
- … referred to as + N
- … ranging from X to Y
Ending
- In the final stage
- … culminating in + N
5Translation Practice – Vietnamese → English
Translate each sentence into English. The word in ( ) is the key word you must use. Check the Tense note, write your answer, then press Show answer.
Band 4.5 – 8 sentences
Đầu tiên, ong chúa đẻ (lays) một quả trứng vào một ô sáp.
Tiếp theo, sau khoảng ba ngày, quả trứng trở thành (becomes) một ấu trùng nhỏ.
Sau đó, ong bảo mẫu cho ấu trùng ăn sữa ong chúa (royal jelly), phấn hoa và mật ong khoảng sáu ngày.
Sau đó, ong thợ phủ (cover) ô sáp bằng sáp.
Tiếp theo, ấu trùng biến thành nhộng và ở trong ô đã đóng (closed) khoảng 12 ngày.
Ở phần thứ hai, con ong mới chui ra (comes out) khỏi ô vào khoảng ngày thứ 21.
Sau đó, nó làm việc (works) trong tổ khoảng ba tuần và dọn dẹp các ô.
Cuối cùng, nó bay ra khỏi tổ để thu thập mật hoa (nectar) và phấn hoa từ những bông hoa.
Band 5.5 – 8 sentences
Trước tiên, ong chúa đẻ một quả trứng duy nhất (single) vào một ô sáp nhỏ.
Sau khoảng ba ngày, quả trứng nở (hatches) thành ấu trùng.
Tiếp theo, ấu trùng được ong bảo mẫu cho ăn (fed) sữa ong chúa, phấn hoa và mật ong trong khoảng sáu ngày.
Sau đó, ô sáp được ong thợ phủ một lớp nắp (cap) bằng sáp.
Sau đó, ấu trùng biến thành nhộng, nhộng phát triển (develops) bên trong ô đã đóng khoảng mười hai ngày.
Ở giai đoạn trưởng thành, con ong non chui ra khỏi ô vào khoảng ngày (day) thứ 21.
Sau đó, nó làm việc bên trong tổ khoảng ba tuần, nơi (where) nó dọn dẹp các ô và cho ấu trùng ăn.
Cuối cùng, nó trở thành ong kiếm ăn (forager) và bay ra ngoài để thu thập mật hoa và phấn hoa.
Band 6.5 – 8 sentences
Chu trình bắt đầu khi ong chúa đặt (deposits) một quả trứng vào một ô sáp hình lục giác.
Khoảng ba ngày sau, quả trứng nở thành một ấu trùng (larva).
Trong sáu ngày tiếp theo, ấu trùng được ong bảo mẫu nuôi dưỡng (nourished), những con ong này cung cấp cho nó sữa ong chúa rồi phấn hoa và mật ong.
Một khi ấu trùng đã lớn hoàn toàn, ô sáp được ong thợ bịt kín (sealed) bằng nắp sáp.
Bên trong ô đã bịt kín, ấu trùng phát triển thành nhộng, một giai đoạn kéo dài (lasts) khoảng mười hai ngày.
Chuyển sang giai đoạn trưởng thành, con ong thợ mới chui ra (emerges) khỏi ô vào khoảng ngày thứ 21.
Trong khoảng ba tuần, nó ở lại bên trong tổ, nơi nó dọn dẹp các ô và chăm sóc (tends) ấu trùng.
Ở giai đoạn cuối, con ong trở thành ong kiếm ăn, con ong này thu thập mật hoa và phấn hoa rồi mang (brings) chúng về tổ.
Band 7.5 – 8 sentences
Vòng đời bắt đầu với việc ong chúa đặt một quả trứng duy nhất vào một ô sáp hình lục giác (hexagonal).
Khoảng ba ngày sau, quả trứng này nở thành một ấu trùng, đánh dấu (marking) sự bắt đầu quá trình phát triển.
Trong sáu ngày tiếp theo, ấu trùng được ong bảo mẫu nuôi dưỡng, ban đầu (initially) bằng sữa ong chúa và sau đó bằng phấn hoa và mật ong.
Một khi đã lớn hoàn toàn, ấu trùng được ong thợ bịt kín bên trong ô của nó, bên dưới (beneath) một nắp sáp.
Ẩn mình bên dưới nắp sáp, nó trải qua quá trình biến thái (metamorphosis) thành nhộng, một giai đoạn kéo dài khoảng mười hai ngày.
Chuyển sang giai đoạn trưởng thành, ong thợ đã phát triển hoàn chỉnh chui ra (emerges) khỏi ô của nó vào khoảng ngày thứ 21.
Trong khoảng ba tuần tiếp theo, nó ở lại trong tổ, thực hiện các nhiệm vụ (duties) như dọn dẹp ô và chăm sóc ấu trùng.
Ở giai đoạn cuối, con ong trở thành ong kiếm ăn, mạo hiểm (venturing) bay ra khỏi tổ để thu thập mật hoa và phấn hoa.
6Linker Practice
Part A: drag (or tap) the linkers into the gaps. Part B: translate using the linker in ( ).
Part A – Band 4.5 linkers (8 sentences)
Computer: drag a linker into a gap. Phone: tap a linker, then tap a gap. Tap a filled gap to empty it.
- , the queen bee lays an egg.
- The queen lays an egg a wax cell.
- , the egg becomes a small larva.
- Nurse bees feed the larva about six days.
- , worker bees cover the cell with wax.
- the second part, the new bee comes out of the cell.
- The bee works in the hive cleans cells.
- , it flies out to collect nectar and pollen.
Part B – Translate with Band 4.5 linkers (5 sentences)
Use the linker in ( ) and follow the Tense note.
Đầu tiên (First), ong chúa đẻ một quả trứng.
Tiếp theo (Next), trứng trở thành ấu trùng.
Sau đó (Then), ong bảo mẫu cho ấu trùng ăn.
Sau đó (After that), con ong mới chui ra khỏi ô.
Cuối cùng (Finally), con ong bay ra ngoài kiếm ăn.
Part A – Band 5.5 linkers (8 sentences)
Computer: drag a linker into a gap. Phone: tap a linker, then tap a gap. Tap a filled gap to empty it.
- , the queen bee lays a single egg.
- about three days, the egg hatches into a larva.
- The larva is fed nurse bees.
- The cell is covered a wax cap.
- The larva turns into a pupa, develops inside the cell.
- the adult stage, the young bee comes out of the cell.
- It works inside the hive, it cleans cells.
- , it becomes a forager.
Part B – Translate with Band 5.5 linkers (5 sentences)
Use the linker in ( ) and follow the Tense note.
Trước tiên (To begin with), ong chúa đẻ một quả trứng vào ô sáp.
Ấu trùng được ong bảo mẫu (by) cho ăn.
Ấu trùng biến thành nhộng, nhộng này (which) phát triển trong ô.
Ở giai đoạn trưởng thành (In the adult stage), con ong non chui ra.
Nó làm việc trong tổ, nơi mà (where) nó dọn dẹp các ô.
Part A – Band 6.5 linkers (8 sentences)
Computer: drag a linker into a gap. Phone: tap a linker, then tap a gap. Tap a filled gap to empty it.
- The cycle begins the queen deposits an egg.
- three days later, the egg hatches.
- The larva is nourished by nurse bees, supply it with royal jelly.
- the larva is fully grown, the cell is sealed.
- The larva becomes a pupa, a stage lasts twelve days.
- the adult phase, the new worker emerges.
- It remains in the hive, it cleans cells.
- , the bee becomes a forager.
Part B – Translate with Band 6.5 linkers (5 sentences)
Use the linker in ( ) and follow the Tense note.
Chu trình bắt đầu khi (when) ong chúa đặt một quả trứng.
Ấu trùng được ong bảo mẫu nuôi, những con ong này (which) cho nó sữa ong chúa.
Một khi (Once) ấu trùng lớn hoàn toàn, ô được bịt kín.
Chuyển sang (Turning to) giai đoạn trưởng thành, con ong mới chui ra.
Nó ở lại trong tổ, nơi mà (where) nó chăm sóc ấu trùng.
Part A – Band 7.5 linkers (8 sentences)
Computer: drag a linker into a gap. Phone: tap a linker, then tap a gap. Tap a filled gap to empty it.
- The life cycle commences the queen depositing a single egg.
- three days later, the egg hatches into a larva.
- The larva is nourished, with royal jelly.
- beneath this cap, it undergoes metamorphosis.
- The fully formed worker from its cell.
- It remains in the hive, duties such as cleaning cells.
- The bee becomes a forager, out of the hive.
- The forager gathers nectar pollen.
Part B – Translate with Band 7.5 linkers (5 sentences)
Use the linker in ( ) and follow the Tense note.
Vòng đời bắt đầu với (commences with) việc ong chúa đặt một quả trứng.
Ấu trùng được nuôi, ban đầu (initially) bằng sữa ong chúa.
Ẩn mình (Concealed) dưới nắp sáp, nó biến thành nhộng.
Nó ở lại trong tổ, thực hiện (performing) các nhiệm vụ như dọn ô.
Con ong trở thành ong kiếm ăn, mạo hiểm (venturing) bay ra khỏi tổ.
7Introduction – Paraphrasing the Task
Paraphrase the task sentence. The column of your band is highlighted.
| Task words | Band 4.5 | Band 5.5 | Band 6.5 | Band 7.5 |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| The diagram below shows | The diagram shows | The diagram illustrates | The diagram illustrates | The given diagram depicts |
| the life cycle | the life cycle | the stages in the life | the different stages in the life | the successive stages of development |
| of a worker honeybee | of a worker bee | of a worker bee | of a female worker bee | of a female worker in a honeybee colony |
| from egg to forager | from an egg to a bee that collects food from flowers | from the egg stage to the time when it collects food | from the laying of an egg to its role as a forager | tracing its progression from a single egg to its eventual role as a forager |
The diagram shows the life cycle of a worker bee, from an egg to a bee that collects food from flowers.
Band 4.5: copies the task words and explains “forager” in simple words.
The diagram illustrates the stages in the life of a worker bee, from the egg stage to the time when it collects food outside the hive.
Band 5.5: a common reporting verb (illustrates), a simple noun phrase and a time clause that explains “forager”.
The diagram illustrates the different stages in the life of a female worker bee, from the laying of an egg to its role as a forager.
Band 6.5: an accurate paraphrase (a female worker bee) and nominalisation (the laying of an egg, its role as a forager).
The given diagram depicts the successive stages of development of a female worker in a honeybee colony, tracing its progression from a single egg to its eventual role as a forager.
Band 7.5: precise verb (depicts), academic noun phrase (the successive stages of development), a participle clause (tracing its progression …) and the technical word forager used naturally.
The diagram shows / illustrates / depicts the life cycle / the stages in the life of a worker bee / a female worker bee, from the egg stage to its role as a forager.
8Overview
An overview gives the number of stages and the start and end; higher bands add the two main phases in more precise language. No details (no “3 days”, “6 days”, “12 days”, “day 21” or “3 weeks”).
Band 4.5 formula
Overall, there are eight steps in this life cycle. It starts with the queen laying an egg and finishes with the bee collecting food outside the hive.
Why Band 4.5: Two short simple sentences, basic words (steps, starts, finishes), no phases.
Band 5.5 formula
Overall, there are eight stages in the life cycle. The first five stages happen inside a wax cell, and the last three show the adult life of the bee. The cycle begins with the queen laying an egg and ends with the bee collecting food outside the hive.
Why Band 5.5: Names the two parts in simple words; begins with … ends with …; no numbers or details.
Band 6.5 formula
Overall, there are eight stages in the life cycle, which can be divided into two main phases: development inside the cell and adult life. The cycle begins with the queen laying an egg and ends with the bee collecting food outside the hive.
Why Band 6.5: A which-clause divides the stages into two phases; nominal phrases (the harvesting of, the production of).
Band 7.5 formula
Overall, the life cycle comprises eight distinct stages, which fall into two main phases – development inside a wax cell and adult life – commencing with the laying of an egg and culminating in the gathering of nectar and pollen.
Why Band 7.5: comprises · distinct · fall into · dashes for the phases · commencing with … culminating in … in ONE sentence.
9Writing Practice
Essay plan: Introduction → Overview → Body 1: Stages 1–5 (Development inside the cell) → Body 2: Stages 6–8 (Adult life). Your writing is saved on this device.
Exercise 1 – Match the paraphrase
Choose the best synonym for each word from the task.
- shows →
- life cycle →
- worker honeybee →
- forager →
- below →
Exercise 2 – Choose the best Overview
Which sentence is a good overview?
Exercise 3 – Complete Body 1 (Band 4.5)
Type ONE word in each gap. Look at the diagram for the details.
First, the queen bee an egg in a wax cell. Next, after about three days, the egg becomes a small . Then, nurse bees give the larva royal jelly, pollen and for about six days. After that, worker bees cover the cell with . Next, the larva changes into a and stays in the closed cell for about 12 days.
Exercise 4 – Put Body 2 in order (Band 4.5)
Choose 1–3 for each sentence.
Exercise 3 – Complete Body 1 (Band 5.5)
Type ONE word in each gap. Look at the diagram for the details.
To begin with, the queen bee lays a egg in a small wax cell. After about three days, the egg into a larva. Next, the larva is fed with royal jelly, pollen and honey nurse bees for about six days. After that, the cell is covered with a wax by worker bees. Then, the larva turns into a pupa, develops inside the closed cell for about twelve days.
Exercise 4 – Put Body 2 in order (Band 5.5)
Choose 1–3 for each sentence.
Exercise 3 – Complete Body 1 (Band 6.5)
Type ONE word in each gap. Look at the diagram for the details.
The cycle begins the queen deposits an egg in a hexagonal wax cell. Approximately three days later, the egg hatches a larva. During the following six days, the larva is by nurse bees, which supply it with royal jelly and then pollen and honey. the larva is fully grown, the cell is with a wax cap by worker bees.
Exercise 4 – Put Body 2 in order (Band 6.5)
Choose 1–3 for each sentence.
Exercise 3 – Complete Body 1 (Band 7.5)
Type ONE word in each gap. Look at the diagram for the details.
The life cycle commences with the queen a single egg in a hexagonal wax cell. Roughly three days later, this egg hatches a larva, which is nourished by nurse bees over the next six days, with royal jelly and subsequently with pollen and honey. Once fully grown, the larva is sealed inside its cell beneath a wax cap. Concealed beneath this cap, it undergoes into a pupa, a stage roughly twelve days.
Exercise 4 – Put Body 2 in order (Band 7.5)
Choose 1–3 for each sentence.
Write your essay – paragraph by paragraph
Use the Band 6.5 formulas, linkers and samples from Steps 3–8. Check the Band Standard on the left before you write.
Exercise 5 – Introduction
One sentence. Paraphrase the task (Step 7).
Words: 0 (about 20–30 words)
Exercise 6 – Overview
Use the formula for your band (Step 8).
Words: 0 (about 25–45 words)
Exercise 7 – Body 1 (Stages 1–5)
Write the stages in order with a different linker for each.
Words: 0 (about 55–75 words)
Exercise 8 – Body 2 (Stages 6–8)
Start with a phase change (In the factory / Turning to …).
Words: 0 (about 50–70 words)
Exercise 9 – Your full essay
Press “Collect my paragraphs”, then edit them into one essay and compare with the model.
Words: 0 (minimum 150)
Model Answer 6.5
Write your own essay first, then compare. Highlighted = key collocations to learn.